“Stay inside, Brenda,” Sheriff Miller said, his voice unusually tight. “I’m two minutes out. Do not open the door.”
I looked back at the screen. The locksmith popped the gate open. My father turned to the realtor and pointed at my front porch.
I turned up the volume on the live feed just in time to hear him say the sentence that made my knees buckle.
“She won’t be a problem,” he told the realtor. “Because according to this court order she no longer owns this property.”
I blink, trying to comprehend what Iโve just heard. My breath catches in my throat. The court order? What court order?
My fingers shake as I crank up the volume again. Cody leans in, trying to read something on the clipboard the realtor is holding. โIt says the propertyโs been transferred,โ he mutters. โProbate override, default claim. She never filed the final registration in time.โ
What the hell does that mean?
I dart across the room and yank open the drawer with all my legal documents. The deed, the purchase receipt, my ID. Itโs all there. I never missed a filingโI was meticulous. I sit on the floor, surrounded by paper, my laptop open beside me. I pull up the Montana land registry site, typing with frantic urgency. My parcel number. My name. My claim.
โNO RECORD FOUND.โ
My scream tears through the silence of the cabin. My hands clutch my hair, yanking it in disbelief. This canโt be happening. I stare at the screen, my heart pounding so loud I can hear it in my ears. Theyโve done somethingโsomeone has erased me from the system. Legally. Officially.
A knock sounds at my front door.
I leap to my feet, gasping. Sheriff Millerโs cruiser is visible through the front window, his hat already off as he steps onto the porch. He looks tired. Noโhe looks concerned.
I swing open the door. โYou said two minutes,โ I snap. โThat was ten!โ
โI got here as fast as I could.โ His eyes flit behind me, noting the papers scattered on the floor. โBrenda, I need you to listen carefully.โ
โTheyโre trying to steal my house,โ I hiss, jabbing a finger toward the front gate. โYou have to arrest them!โ
The Sheriff lifts a hand, palm-out, like Iโm a wild animal that might bolt. โI can’t arrest anyone. Not yet.โ
โWhat do you mean, not yet? They broke in! That locksmithโhe bypassed my gate!โ
Sheriff Miller sighs, pulling a thick manila envelope from under his arm. โYour father came to the courthouse yesterday. He filed this.โ He hands it to me like itโs ticking. โItโs a claim of ownership based on guardianship status and mental fitness proceedings filed in absentia. The court granted temporary control.โ
My mouth falls open. โGuardianship? Iโm thirty-two years old!โ
โHe argued mental duress and detachment from reality. Claimed you disappeared without notifying anyone and bought land under unstable conditions.โ
โThatโs not true,โ I whisper, but even as I say it, I remember how Iโd vanished, how Iโd cut off everyone, blocked their numbers, changed my bank accounts, my address.
โYour stepmother submitted statements. So did Cody,โ he says, gently.
I canโt breathe. โThey think Iโm crazy?โ
โThey made them think youโre crazy,โ a new voice cuts in. Itโs deeper, rougher, and it comes from the gate.
All heads turn.
A tall man in a snow-dusted flannel coat is walking up the drive, pulling a duffel bag behind him. His hair is long, dark, tied back in a messy knot. And his eyesโthey burn with the kind of rage I havenโt seen since I left the world behind.
โEli?โ I gasp.
He gives me a tight nod. โHeard you might need a hand.โ
Sheriff Miller stiffens. โYou know this man?โ
โYes,โ I say quickly. โHeโs a friend.โ
More than that, onceโbut not something Iโm willing to unpack right now.
Eli steps beside me, all calm strength. โI saw the motion notice posted online. Had your name on it. Didnโt sit right.โ
โYou drove all the way out here?โ I whisper.
โFlew to Bozeman. Drove the rest.โ
I want to hug him, cry into his jacket. But instead, I pull him inside.
Sheriff Miller follows, closing the door behind him.
โIโm going to file an emergency injunction,โ I say. โIโll call the state assessor, the title office. Iโll contact a lawyer.โ
Eliโs hand touches my shoulder. โGood. Do that. But first, letโs stop them from coming in.โ
I turn to Sheriff Miller. โCan they enter? Do they have access?โ
The sheriff scratches his neck. โTechnically, yes. The locksmith got past your gate with that court order, and unless you get an immediate stay, they can proceed.โ
โNo,โ I say. โNo way. Iโm not letting them touch my land.โ
Eli walks to the window. โThen we make it so they donโt want to.โ
I look at him, confused. โWhat?โ
โWe stall,โ he says. โWe let them know theyโre not welcome. Not until the law catches up.โ
Outside, my father and Cody have started walking up the drive. The realtor is talking on her phone, her brows furrowed. The locksmith is packing up, clearly uncertain about proceeding.
โLetโs go,โ Eli says.
We step onto the porch together. Iโm shaking, but his presence steadies me. My father stops when he sees us. His face is a mask of calm superiority.
โBrenda,โ he says, voice smooth. โYouโre making this harder than it needs to be.โ
โI live here,โ I say firmly. โThis is my land.โ
โIt was your land,โ he says. โBut your behavior raised red flags. You isolated yourself. You didnโt return calls, didnโt engage in rational communication. The court agreed.โ
โYou lied to them,โ I shoot back.
He lifts the folder in his hand. โNo one lies to the court, Brenda. Iโm sorry, but this is for your own good.โ
โThat line again,โ I snap. โYou said that when you forced me to quit art school. When you took my car. When you erased me from Christmas dinner.โ
Cody shifts awkwardly. โBrenda, maybe just let it goโโ
โYou donโt get to say that!โ I explode. โYou stood there drinking wine with my stocking still hanging in the hallway. You didnโt even look for me.โ
My fatherโs jaw tightens. โWe did what was best.โ
โBest for you,โ I say.
The realtor clears her throat. โWe should probably rescheduleโโ
โDamn right you should,โ Eli cuts in, stepping forward. โBecause this place isnโt for sale. Not now. Not ever.โ
The realtor eyes him warily. โAnd you are?โ
โIโm the guy who knows her rights,โ he says. โAnd Iโm willing to stand in front of a bulldozer if I have to.โ
My father glares at him. โThis doesnโt concern you.โ
โThen why does my name appear on the landโs surveyor addendum?โ Eli asks coolly. โYou really shouldโve read the fine print. My nameโs been on file for five months. Co-applicant. I helped with the down payment.โ
I stare at him, shocked. โYou added yourself to the deed?โ
โI didnโt tell you because I thought youโd fight it,โ he says gently. โBut I wanted to make sure no one could push you off this mountain.โ
My knees nearly give out. I steady myself on the railing. โEliโฆโ
He shrugs. โI believe in you. Even when your own family doesnโt.โ
Sheriff Miller takes a deep breath. โWell, this just became a civil dispute. And I suggest everyone vacate until a judge sorts it out.โ
My fatherโs face darkens. โYouโll regret this, Brenda.โ
โNo,โ I say, voice clear, ringing into the snow-dusted stillness. โIโm done regretting. Iโm done letting you dictate my life.โ
He turns and walks away without another word. Cody hesitates, but eventually follows. The realtor mutters something about lawsuits and liabilities as she hurries back to her SUV.
I watch them leave, breath fogging in the cold. The locksmith gives me an apologetic shrug, then drives off.
Only when the gate closes again do I let myself cry.
Eli pulls me into his arms, and I sob into his shoulder. For everything. For the family I thought I had. For the house that almost wasnโt mine. For the fact that someoneโfinallyโchose me.
โYouโre not alone, Brenda,โ he whispers. โNot anymore.โ
We sit on the porch steps as the sun rises behind the hills. Snowflakes drift lazily in the morning light.
Tomorrow, there will be legal battles and paperwork. There will be affidavits and motions, maybe even court dates.
But today, this land is mine.
And for the first time in my life, so am I.




